I’m excited to be participating in my first Halloweensie contest, hosted by Susanna Leonard Hill. What’s a Halloweensie? Much like a fun-size bag of M&Ms, a Halloweensie is a small, sweet treat of a story about Halloween that will appeal to kids 12 and under. The story must be only 100 words or less and contain three provided words. This year’s words are skeleton, mask, and creep.
You can read all of the spellbinding stories on Susanna’s blog through the provided links or in the comment section. Replies with your thoughts are appreciated!
If you’d like to try your hand at a Halloweensie, you have until October 31, 11:59 Eastern Standard Time to post and enter your story for a chance to win one of the prizes donated by a group of amazing authors. You can learn more about the rules and how to enter on Susanna Leonard Hill’s blog.
Here’s my story. I hope you enjoy goblin’ it up!
Custom Costumes
By Kathy Carroll
Hello! I’ve heard you’re just the kid
to help with my grave plight.
I’m going out on Halloween
and want to look a fright.
You see I’m just a skeleton
but hoping you can mask it.
I want to look my ghastly best
when creeping from my casket.
I need a scary-good disguise.
The wizard said you’re aces
at dressing up and eerie sounds
and making ghoulish faces.
So show me… vampire!… Zombie!… Ghost!
Oh! Choosing’s hard to do!
Wait! Freeze! Right there…. That’s it! Ah ha!
I want to go as you!
Nice rhyming, cute story, surprise ending!! Clever!!
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Thanks very much!
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Love your POV, rhyme and meter! Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks! This contest was such a blast! I just read your poem too – Fantastic! Good luck to you too!
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Neat way to have to addressed to the reader!
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Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Great story. Loved, when creeping from my casket! Good luck!
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Thanks, Nancy! That was the line that pulled the whole thing together. So glad you liked it! I just read your story too – fantastic! Good luck to you too!
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Ha! Very cute and clever!
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Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Fabulous! Your rhyme and meter are spot on. Great word choice and hilarious twist at the end. And you’ve also chosen an unusual POV and given it a perfect title. If I had any say in it, we’d see this in Susanna’s short list! Good luck!
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Thanks, Jilanne! I love your writing, so this means a lot to me! This was such a fun contest!
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Love this! Terrific rhyming & great choice of writing from a skeleton’s point of view.
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Thanks! I really enjoyed reading your story too!
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Thanks!
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Wow! This has to be one of my favorites! Great Job!
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Thanks so much! It was a lot of fun to write! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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